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Jul
14th
2015

CCC: Cleverpun's Critique Corner #2 · 10:53pm Jul 14th, 2015

For a breakdown of the format, don't forget to check the first entry.


Title: Of Angels
Author: PaulAsaran

Short summary: Angel Bunny learns to write from Twilight, for a reason that quickly becomes obvious. Told through letters/written conversations.

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Jul
28th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #4 — Sort of Panic Themed · 6:35pm Jul 28th, 2015

Sep
12th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #9 — Asylum · 6:31am Sep 12th, 2015

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For today’s critique, I thought I would try something different. Rather than reading a new story, I took a story I had previously “reviewed” (by leaving a comment on it), and then rework that comment into a proper critique.

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Sep
22nd
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #10 — Red Apples · 1:06am Sep 22nd, 2015

Aug
3rd
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #5 — Painted Jack · 7:20pm Aug 3rd, 2015

Feb
5th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #39 — The Last King · 8:29pm Feb 5th, 2020

Jan
2nd
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #35 — The Joy Hive · 6:17am Jan 2nd, 2020

Dec
27th
2019

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #34 — She Kills Monsters · 12:57am Dec 27th, 2019

Mar
31st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner: Description/Title Reviews #3 · 9:42am Mar 31st, 2016

The description and title are some of the most important parts of a story. They provide readers with their first impression, convince them to read it, and characterize your story even after it is finished.

Today, we look at a set of stories, based solely on their descriptions, titles, and other relevant paratext.

The Alicorn Curse by chillbook1
http://i.imgur.com/BAtZIgd.png

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Jan
25th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #18 — Bitter-Sweetie · 7:41am Jan 25th, 2016

Jun
6th
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #27 — Palimpsest · 11:17pm Jun 6th, 2016

Jan
21st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #16 — So You've Just Slept With Your Best Friend · 12:42am Jan 21st, 2016

Aug
25th
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #7 — Lost and Never Found · 3:10am Aug 25th, 2015

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Today’s story relies on not one, but two twists. Since the first twist is incredibly blunt, I have not bothered to spoiler-tag it.


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Oct
31st
2015

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #12 — Just A Simple Story · 8:28pm Oct 31st, 2015

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I don’t like catering to holidays, but here’s a review for Halloween anyway. Any time is a good time to review Dark fic.


Title: Just A Simple Story

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Jan
23rd
2016

Taking Review Requests [CLOSED] · 11:36am Jan 23rd, 2016

If [OPEN], I am accepting new requests. If [CLOSED], I am working on other things (check back later :twilightsmile:)

If you follow me, then you are likely aware of my ongoing review series. In order to mix things up a little, I am now taking requests for stories to review. Like everything in life, there are some caveats:
*Only request reviews for one of your own stories.

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Jan
25th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #37 — Sister Solstice · 11:39am Jan 25th, 2020

Jan
14th
2016

Four Year Anniversary Special: cleverpun's Critique Corner — If You Came to Conquer/Inexcusable · 9:06pm Jan 14th, 2016

Last year, to celebrate my three year anniversary on the site, I wrote a long, meandering blog post looking back on all the writing I had done. It was an interesting exercise, though its experimental nature perhaps limited its utility.

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Mar
22nd
2017

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #31 — A Thousand Roses · 6:18am Mar 22nd, 2017

Feb
12th
2020

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #40 — Souls and Silicon · 2:58am Feb 12th, 2020

Jan
31st
2016

CCC: cleverpun's Critique Corner #21 — The Quest by iisaw · 5:04pm Jan 31st, 2016

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